The Unholy Legions of Anti-Sanctus Chaotica, a Warhammer Online Destruction Regiment, Hag of Khaela Mensha Khaine

Winterpeach

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« on: April 11, 2009, 08:11:28 PM »

The distinctive, feline grace, paired with piercing pale blue eyes, were but minor characteristics of the fair witch. Hiding within the thickness of the wood, she eyed her next victim closely, whom she knew quite well. The putrid scent of hope lingered in the air, but the flowing auburn hair dispelled all uncertainty she might have had. The chilled air brushed past her cheek, as she stared lustfully at this unexpected sacrifice, lounging by the river. Her daggers thirsted for blood, and she let no time go to waste as she unsheathed her weapons and stealthed through the brush over to her victim. She thrust her poisonous daggers into his side, as the weak elf stumbled for his weapon she used this opportunity to penetrate his yellow tinted skin causing her frenzy to grow more threatening. With a swift turn and slice of her daggers the weakling fell to the dirt, his blood soiling the ground seeping to the water. She chuckled, tossing her hair over her frail shoulders as she cleaned her daggers slowly, savouring the aroma of fresh blood. The hellish mind of this one, this..Winterpeach, so she was called, was irreplaceable. Few things warmed her heart more than caressing an open throat with the edge her venomous blades.

For Khaine.


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Ghazto

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Re: Hag of Khaela Mensha Khaine

« Reply #1 on: April 11, 2009, 10:32:09 PM »

Is it wrong that I got incredible turned on by this story?


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Darcros

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Re: Hag of Khaela Mensha Khaine

« Reply #2 on: April 11, 2009, 10:52:15 PM »

To Ghazto: Yes

To Winterpeach: Interesting story, I liked it but I wish it was a bit longer.


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Winterpeach

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Re: Hag of Khaela Mensha Khaine

« Reply #3 on: April 11, 2009, 11:50:30 PM »

((Yeah, it wasn't really a 'story' just more of an encounter with an enemy. I haven't finished the other one yet

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Tyrinel

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Re: Hag of Khaela Mensha Khaine

« Reply #4 on: April 12, 2009, 01:39:39 AM »

Other one? You mean you've actually killed stuff? That's hard to believe...

Anyways... nice little bit of story telling there. I likes the whole graceful yet deadly aspect of this Winterpeach, well written. Good thing she didn't meet her arch enemy though... the dreaded cliffs.


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Mahk Noir

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I like it wet.

Re: Hag of Khaela Mensha Khaine

« Reply #5 on: April 12, 2009, 01:45:11 AM »

I rather like the repeated use of the word "penetrated."


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Whippy whippy whip! EVIL!

Winterpeach

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Re: Hag of Khaela Mensha Khaine

« Reply #6 on: April 12, 2009, 01:45:46 AM »

((Hahaha, I know, I need to write something about her and her cliff-diving. That'll be an adventure..and quite a long story.))


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MiztrezzLyn

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Re: Hag of Khaela Mensha Khaine

« Reply #7 on: April 12, 2009, 07:47:27 AM »

I liked it. It was detailed and you captured the lust for blood quite well. This ought to make a few people a lot more cautious around you. They'd be fools not to be.

Well done


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Winterpeach

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Re: Hag of Khaela Mensha Khaine

« Reply #8 on: April 12, 2009, 12:34:26 PM »

Quote from: Machiavelli-Noir on April 12, 2009, 01:45:11 AM

I rather like the repeated use of the word "penetrated."

I slipped that in there just for you, Lord Noir.


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