The Unholy Legions of Anti-Sanctus Chaotica, a Warhammer Online Destruction Regiment, Pleasing Gork and Mork

Ok so its only a quarter complete but i thought i could get feedbacks as i continued writing. So dont be afraid to point out anything or give advice!

Havent decided on a title yet hahahaha...aih..

They had been running for days now through this cursed land, their numbers growing smaller as the weak died from hunger or exhaustion (Note it would take a lot to make an Ork die from exhaustion) were it not for grimgors exceptional ability to lead and size of course his retinue of black orks would have turned on him long ago.

In fact Grimgor Ironhide is not your everyday ork, as time passed he would create a huge WAAAGH destroying anything and everything in his path in his tremendous lust for battle. Going as far as to splintering the shield of Chaos Lord Archon himself and nearly killing him (Though one could say Archon was spent in battling Valten.) But Lord Archon was spared and Grimgor Iron hide quit the field, probably to fight the Chaos Lord another day. But for now this story isn’t about the infamous Grimgor Ironhide but 2 Orks, joined together not because of friendship, or brotherhood, but for 1 thing only, fighting and their amazing journey for more fighting, in hopes it will lead to more fighting.

Somewhere in the Northern Portion of the Worlds Edge Mountain.

“Ee keeps us scurryin' any longa an ill be 'ungry enough ter eat a gobbo”, Kahgar Nozbreka said eyeing their shaman in their war band hungrily as they continued their pace through the mountains but was quickly silenced with a slap by his comrade. “Don’t be upseddin' da waa boss anymore den ee iz Kahgar, ya’ve seun wot ee iz capabul o' doin' ter us, bodyguards or nub.” Gorlag Facebasha look around quickly to make sure they weren’t over heard and continued to add, “Besides were past the borders, we should reach an ork settlement soon enough and begin a new WAAAGH”. Kahgar grunted his approval.

True to the orks word they reached a small ork encampment by nightfall and Grimgor challenged their leader for control, it wasn’t pretty. Grimgor Ironhide retinue of Black Orks that were with him too forged a name for themselves, soon Orks everywhere would learn to fear these Black Orks of Grimgor who were to be called "Da Immortulz". Within a month Grimgor had carved a small empire for himself, leaving the broken bodies of those who had previously commanded the tribes lying in the ditch. From there he set course on a campaign of destruction that the Northern Worlds Edge Mountains have rarely seen in its history.

A few days later at Karak Kadrin (A Dwarf Stronghold)

“Lets git dim boys!!” War boss Grimgor yelled to his WAAAAGH!! as he charged the dwarven ranks. Chaos ensued as Tides of Green smashed through lines of steel and hammer, it was hell, and Kahgar and Gorlag were having the time of their life. “Diez Stuntie!!” Kahgar bellowed, burying his choppa deep in between the Ironbreakers skull, quickly he turned raising his shield as the thrown hammer landed with a thud. “'aving trubble you git?” Gorlag yelled a few feet away, “Bet ya- oh no ya don’t,” but before the rune priest could lets the words of power escape his mouth he was greeted with a fist through his mouth and a choppa in the chest for his trouble.

3 Hammerers saw their priest go down and charged in for revenge, Gorlag chuckled to himself, “Lets see wot ya got stunties”. They charged and Gorlag raised his shield menacingly, unfortunately Gorlag and Kahgar had run into dwarf veterans that had steadily made their way through all the chaos to tackle the most dangerous threat of all, Grimgor and his Black Orks. The Hammerers quickly encircled Gorlag, help did not cross either orks mind, this is what they loved and that was that, at any rate Kahgar was busy with dwarves on his own, particularly a nasty little iron breaker which did not understand the term dead.

“Your dead ya filthy orc!” The hammerer facing Gorlag charged quickly joined by the dwarves on his left and right flank, gorlag quickly parried the first blow, blocked the third and swung his shield around as he did so to knock the last dwarf unconscious. “WAAAAAAAGH!!”

It seemed gorlag was having all the fun as Kahgar finally managed to make the iron breakers head no longer connected to his body, he grunted happily, the battle was going well and the dwarves were slowly being pushed back towards their massive gates. Suddenly he saw Gorlag go down, one of the hammerers finding a slight opening and aimed a blow at his legs, the second blow might have smashed his skull too if it wasn’t for a massive explosion of green fire that immediately incinerated the hammerers fighting